The October Chronicles Tom Leveen

Imagine Sir Anthony Hopkins, most known for his role as Hannibal Lecter in Silence
of the Lambs.

Now, Sir Anthony Hopkins was  once
just Tony Hopkins, starting like all of us. He was 17 or 18, doing shows
wherever he could. In one play, he worked with Sir Laurence Olivier, considered
the greatest classical actor of his generation. Hopkins, playing a minor role,
mustered the courage to ask Olivier for advice on his performance.

Imagine Sir Laurence at his makeup table. Hopkins asks for advice, and Sir
Laurence turns and says:

"When you speak, you are the star."

Just this morning on my walk, I brushed a hand over a short pine tree and came up with the following sentences on the fly, which might open a novel someday:

Despite their name, pine needles are actually soft,
almost silky, to the touch when caressed the right way. Rub them the wrong way, and they’ll stick you. My mom was the same way.

Will it win a literary award? No, but it’s a vivid image, ain’t it?

In this episode, learn to go outside to improve your description.

If you find this episode helpful, I am positive you'll get a ton of use from my book on improving dialogue, available at Amazon and other retailers:

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Thanks for being here!

Pro tip: You don't get writer's block... :)

Here's a quick 16-minute bit about how to crush logjams in your writing!

If this is helpful, may I point you to STORYCRAFT...ten hours of hanging out with two successful authors, talking about everything from story structure to traditional publishing contracts and more!

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🎬 Crafting the Perfect Opening Line for Your Novel 📚

In this video, we delve into the art of writing captivating first sentences for your novel.

Description:
In this tutorial, we explore how to write a first sentence that hooks readers and agents alike. Using examples from my own writing, we compare different approaches and discuss the nuances that can make your opening line stand out. Whether you're aiming for traditional publishing or self-publishing, crafting an engaging first sentence is crucial. Learn how to attract your target audience and make a strong first impression!

Key Points:


How to craft a compelling first sentence
The difference between functional and captivating openings
Tips for establishing genre and setting quickly
The significance of the first page for grabbing attention

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🚀 Unlock Your Character's Journey: A Writing Exercise 🚀

In this video, I'm sharing a powerful exercise to give depth and dimension to your characters. Whether you're working on a short story, novel, or series, this exercise will help you create memorable characters.

Timestamps:
00:00 - Introduction
00:20 - Describing Your Protagonist at the Beginning
01:05 - Sensory Details: Going Beyond Appearance
02:10 - Repeating the Exercise for the Ending
03:15 - Establishing Your Character's Journey
04:08 - Using Sensory Details Effectively
04:46 - Conclusion

Don't just describe what your character looks like; delve into what they taste, smell, and feel like. By the end of your story, your character should have transformed, and these sensory details will help you show that journey.

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