41 episodes
Night's Knights Emerian Rich
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3.4 • 43 Ratings
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Severina is an exotic beauty from the jungles of Brazil whose family is brutally murdered by the same man she later calls lover.
Markham is a simple Irish immigrant striving for the American dream in 1860 when coach robbers cause his untimely death.
Julien is a knight who serves as guardian angel to his family but has no clue about his predestined fate.
Three vampires on a quest for knowledge attempt to create the perfect offspring, but from the shadows an even more demonic evil threatens their immortality.
Will a powerful mortal named Jespa be the one to save them all?
Cover art: Christen Kojnok
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Chapter 1
Jespa isn't the kind of girl you cheat on. She's the perfect-bodied vixen that men and women fall in love with on sight. Yet, Rafe was stupid enough to screw up.
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Chapter 2
Martin hates Jespa. She's evil. Possibly even the devil! And worst of all, she's stolen his lover.
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Chapter 3
A letter to Mr. Sam Kellerman of the National Organization of Supernatural Specialists from Mr. Tommy Lewis, Ketchikan, Alaska. A Tlinget man explains his daughter's supernatural gifts to a scientist who he hopes can help him.
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Chapter 4
Jimmy Mason is a cowboy from just outside San Antonio, Texas. What use does he have for superstition and supernatural visions? None! So why is he seeing some old time stagecoach man?
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Chapter 5
Kristine Logan has been having dreams of a handsome stranger with blue eyes and long white hair. Why does he consume her thoughts and why does he seem so real?
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Chapter 6
Kristine goes clubbing with a friend, but The Man is still in her thoughts. Meeting up with Jespa, they compare notes on why life is such hell.
Customer Reviews
Good but needs work
I made it about half way through but sadly I couldn't finish it. The story jumps around way too much and rambles. A little more thought and consolitation of the story would make for a better listening experience and the accents were interesting but a bit over done. I think it was a good first attempt and with a little more practice could make for a great read. Good luck in the future!
Creative, Adventurous, and sometimes Erotic
Totally creative and adventurous, and occasionally erotic, these stories are a complete world I find addictive.
Great job Emerian Rich!
A train wreck!
FormerAM on 8/28/09 summed up my feelings on this fairly well.
Just passed the half way mark and the story is so bad that I can't turn away.
Observations for the author:
Voice acting - not required but, if you do it, own it.
- option 1: if you are going to read your own work and can't do accents then just do a straight read.
- option 2: if you have to have accents, go find people who can do them.
Story: so far there isn't one. An "almost interesting collection of vignettes" is the best that I can do. There is almost a short story but without flow or continuity.
Music: 1/5 (or more) of the episode should not be comprised of music, especially not the same ENTIRE piece more than once. Give to us, your listeners, something broader. Don't pad your episode!
History: when writing a historically based novel, do some research. If you aren't willing to research, write what you know. Some of the threads had holes big enough to throw a cat through.
General word choice: Drop the hyperbole and walk away! Florid has it's place and - until you are writing for a second rate romance novel machine - please step away from that third rail.
More thoughts and edits to first thoughts later as I continue to watch the crash and burn. Hopefully I'll be eating my words...!