The Better Writer Podcast

Olivia Bedford

You want to write great books, books just like the ones you’ve been reading and falling in love with all your life, but somehow your vision just isn’t showing up on the page. Don’t despair. It’s not about lacking talent or some magical creative spark. You just need to learn how fiction works and The Better Writer Podcast is here to help. On this show, we explore what it really takes to write a book that readers can’t put down: mastering story craft fundamentals, revising like a pro (and getting pro help), and building a writing process that fits your real life, not someone else’s Instagram-perfect writing routine. Hosted by Olivia Bedford, a former English teacher turned developmental editor and Author Accelerator Certified Book Coach, this show has one goal: help fiction writers unlearn all the misguided, one-size-fits-no-one advice out there and replace it with strategies that actually make your stories work for your future readers. If you’re an aspiring novelist who’s ready to finally understand how fiction works—and maybe even get paid for your writing someday—you’re in the right place. Welcome, and happy writing! P.S. Don’t forget to hit subscribe and become a better writer, one episode at a time.

  1. Nov 3

    The #1 First Draft Editing Mistake I See as a Developmental Editor

    You finished your first draft - yay!! But now it’s time for the next and arguably most difficult phase: figuring out how to edit your first draft. Over the next three weeks, I’m going to share the most common revision & editing mistakes that I see as a fiction developmental editor & book coach, starting with one of the biggest offenders - sitting down and reading your first draft like it’s a published, polished book. Why is that so dangerous? It puts your focus on the wrong things. First drafts need you to look at them from 10,000 feet in the air. Reading your first draft cover to cover is like hiking. You’re only going to see the trees when instead you need to be focused on the shape of your forest as a whole. Learn more about how this problem shows up and why it’s such a killer for beginning writers in this week’s episode of the Better Writer Podcast. Looking for even more help? I'm running a masterclass on November 17th, 2026 called "Fix Your First Draft." You'll learn what first drafts really need, how to manage every stage of your revision & editing process, what to focus on in your first draft, and most importantly, you'll map out your best next step in revision! Fix Your First Draft is just $17 until November 4th, then it's $27. Learn more and enroll here: https://oliviahelpswriters.thrivecart.com/fix-your-first-draft/ For a full transcript of this episode, please visit https://oliviahelpswriters.com/bwp/48.

  2. Oct 27

    How to Fast Draft Without Condemning Your Future Self to Revision Hell

    I’ve spent the last two episodes talking about writing challenges. If you’re thinking about Novel November or any of the other NaNoWriMo replacements out there, you’re probably excited to start writing the book. But what happens when you’re done and it’s time to revise that messy first draft? I talk about revision a lot, and I definitely have suggestions for how to manage the revision process when you get there, but this episode isn’t about revision. It’s about setting yourself up for success while you’re still drafting. In this episode, I’m sharing five things you can do while writing the draft to make your life easier in revision. They are: Write down revision ideas as they come to you during the drafting process.Keep those future revision notes in a single, designated revision OR consolidate every week or so if you tend to take notes in multiple places.Document all big decisions about your world or character backstories so you have the beginnings of a story/series bible when you’re done.Reverse outline as you draft by summarizing each day’s new writing when you’re done.Use TK/FCK or another marking system to designate missing information or decisions that you want to make later (e.g., character names, worldbuilding decisions, etc.).Listen to the full episode for my explanation of each technique and how you can implement it in your writing process! Happy novel writing! P.S. Still looking for a new November writing challenge? Here are some options gathered by ProWritingAid! I’m not sponsoring or affiliated with any of these challenges. I’m just a book coach who may or may not be joining a challenge as well this week! For a full transcript of the episode, please visit https://oliviahelpswriters.com/bwp/47

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You want to write great books, books just like the ones you’ve been reading and falling in love with all your life, but somehow your vision just isn’t showing up on the page. Don’t despair. It’s not about lacking talent or some magical creative spark. You just need to learn how fiction works and The Better Writer Podcast is here to help. On this show, we explore what it really takes to write a book that readers can’t put down: mastering story craft fundamentals, revising like a pro (and getting pro help), and building a writing process that fits your real life, not someone else’s Instagram-perfect writing routine. Hosted by Olivia Bedford, a former English teacher turned developmental editor and Author Accelerator Certified Book Coach, this show has one goal: help fiction writers unlearn all the misguided, one-size-fits-no-one advice out there and replace it with strategies that actually make your stories work for your future readers. If you’re an aspiring novelist who’s ready to finally understand how fiction works—and maybe even get paid for your writing someday—you’re in the right place. Welcome, and happy writing! P.S. Don’t forget to hit subscribe and become a better writer, one episode at a time.