Plot and Punchline: how to write pageturning novels and killer comedy sets

Mike and Zelda

Kill it on the page and on the stage. Whether you're structuring a high-stakes thriller or tightening a five-minute set, the secret weapon is the same: mastering tension and release. Each week, we pull back the curtain on the creative mechanics shared by bestselling authors and headlining comedians. Whether you're killing your darlings or killing it on stage, this is your go-to guide to help you hook your reader, control the room, and elevate your writing technique.

Episodes

  1. Jul 30

    Beginngs and Openings: What is story?

    Beginnings and Openings in Storytelling and WritingIn this episode, we explore the art of crafting compelling story openings, from novels and fiction to comedy and stand-up. We discuss different structural strategies, the importance of character introductions, and how to hook your audience from the first line. Key TopicsDifferent types of story starts, including community starts and problem-centered openingsThe significance of establishing mood, tone, and character traits early onHow starting in medias res (in the middle of action) can grab attentionThe role of conflict and character flaws in opening scenesExamples of effective first lines from popular books and moviesThe impact of visual cues and environmental details in setting the sceneThe importance of the protagonist’s perspective and emotional state for engaging readersHow to balance setting the scene with delivering substance quicklyTechniques for stand-up comedy openings and stage persona craftingThe value of originality in introductions and how to stand out Resources & Links Anatomy of Story by John TrubyThe Shortest Story Ever (Chris Sykes' example)The Princess Bride by William GoldmanThe Power of Habit by Charles DuhiggFred Allen's Much to Do About Nothing (Book)Jim Whirl’s "10 Great Openings" articleConnect with the Guests:mikefinecomedy.comzeldawritesfiction@gmail.comNotes:The conversation emphasizes that effective storytelling starts with strong character and mood setup, but not at the expense of moving swiftly into the story’s core.In comedy, the opening must quickly establish personality to hook the audience, often through character-based introductions or unique stage persona.Short story examples reveal how minimal words can still evoke conflict and emotion, proving that brevity and punch can work together.

    Beginngs and Openings: What is story?

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Kill it on the page and on the stage. Whether you're structuring a high-stakes thriller or tightening a five-minute set, the secret weapon is the same: mastering tension and release. Each week, we pull back the curtain on the creative mechanics shared by bestselling authors and headlining comedians. Whether you're killing your darlings or killing it on stage, this is your go-to guide to help you hook your reader, control the room, and elevate your writing technique.