I have listened to and see quite a few fan fiction star wars pieces. This is by far one of the best I have heard or see. There are a few things though that gets me about this.
First off, the main character is just hard to listen to, it sounds too much like an infomercial whenever he talks.
Second, this audio drama feels like you are watching a movie with your eyes closed. There is no one explaining what is happening, you just hear bumps and bangs and blasters on the surface of a planet, then the next thing you know you are on the deck of a star destroyer. It takes almost an entire dialog between two people to figure out where you are.
There are some other things, but I don’t want this to seem like a bashing session. It is good quality work for fan fiction, but it could be so much better.
Great job guys, it would be nice to hear some more stuff with a few improvements.
